Tuesday, November 22, 2005

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damp
desolate
corners
in decrepit
rundown
houses
make me
think of
loveā€¦

spurned

18 Comments:

At 12:08 PM, Blogger Ghetufool said...

lovely post man. short and precise narration of a psycho.

 
At 12:31 PM, Blogger Nana said...

AM DISSAPOINTED. U'stand what watching movies without sleep and with i_ _a_s can do.

 
At 8:53 PM, Blogger Rimi said...

er, i didn't exactly have this in mind, but well, to quote a certain comment on MY blog, "vey angsty" ;)

 
At 9:49 AM, Blogger A fool on the hill said...

Ghetuful: Critical appreciation!

Nana: That too Hindi ones, like Chocolate.

Rimi: Angsty? Not really.

 
At 10:00 AM, Blogger vadahole said...

i think of rain and lush greenery when i think of love...and i believe that's more joyfull, but love is not always that joyful and you are right to attach a tinge of meloncholy to it...

 
At 2:19 PM, Blogger Tridib said...

Very minimalist. Very, dare I say, existentialist!

 
At 9:46 AM, Blogger Chaila Bihari said...

Proximity in damp desolate may breed love. Distance, even in sunlit green valleys, may often melt it down. Ye nazdikiyan, ye dooriyan...

 
At 9:46 AM, Blogger Chaila Bihari said...

Proximity in damp desolate may breed love. Distance, even in sunlit green valleys, may often melt it down. Ye nazdikiyan, ye dooriyan...

 
At 3:48 AM, Blogger Roshomon said...

I don't mind desolate corners...but the damp part is slightly depressing.

 
At 10:36 AM, Blogger Rimi said...

was kidding. kidding.

 
At 4:21 PM, Anonymous Ph said...

Desolate corners eh? For more on such topics...check my blog.

 
At 11:30 AM, Blogger A fool on the hill said...

Vadahole: Great thought.

Tridib: Does the comparison put in line with those painters of yore?

Chaila: You are correct; but that a second line of thinking.

 
At 11:32 AM, Blogger A fool on the hill said...

Roshomon: That's why they remind me of spurned love!

Rimi: Point taken.

Ph: I am a regular at phantasmagoria!

 
At 12:37 AM, Anonymous Hyacinth Girl said...

"Decrepit", "damp", "corner"... I was almost waiting for Eliot's yellow fog to creep into the next line.

It was a good one, but I empathise with Rimi's disappointment. Hungry for your prose, Fool. Take me there

 
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